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Wed, 15 Jun 2022 06:56:46 -0400 (EDT) Received: by eve.qyliss.net (Postfix, from userid 1000) id 70101599; Wed, 15 Jun 2022 10:56:44 +0000 (UTC) Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2022 10:56:44 +0000 From: Alyssa Ross To: Ville Ilvonen Subject: Re: [PATCH] doc: addressing architecture.adoc review changes Message-ID: <20220615105644.aey5qeaqwm4eqph3@eve> References: <20220603105431.vlqusi3qqfrttf7g@eve> <20220607064259.588734-1-ville.ilvonen@unikie.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha256; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="ouqccjjas5l2uie7" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20220607064259.588734-1-ville.ilvonen@unikie.com> Message-ID-Hash: YW5SPATIML4NSM4B6EVN7HST6BGXEV2Z X-Message-ID-Hash: YW5SPATIML4NSM4B6EVN7HST6BGXEV2Z X-MailFrom: qyliss@eve.qyliss.net X-Mailman-Rule-Misses: dmarc-mitigation; no-senders; approved; emergency; loop; banned-address; member-moderation; header-match-config-1; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-0; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-1; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header CC: devel@spectrum-os.org X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Patches and low-level development discussion Archived-At: List-Archive: List-Help: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: --ouqccjjas5l2uie7 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Tue, Jun 07, 2022 at 09:42:59AM +0300, Ville Ilvonen wrote: > * page-parent set > * updated copyright sloppiness > * hard wrapped to 80 characters > * updated reference app vm names in the diagram > * used proposed emphasis on kernel hardening > (a topic which would warrant a doc of its' own) > * added the missing definite article mentioned as > an example (don't mind a native English speaker to > spell/grammar check, though) > * Linked to comparison of C/POSIX standard library > implementations for Linux on musl arguments > * updated wayland-console to virtio-console > * used AsciiDoctor's xref > * added missing newline in adoc > > Signed-off-by: Ville Ilvonen Thanks a lot Ville! It's great to have an overview like this in the documentation, and it was something that would have been really difficult for me to do because I'd have had trouble selecting the information that would be most important for somebody new to the system. I've just committed it, and I also made some changes that I think will help make the overview more understandable =E2=80=94 really just moving some things around and rewording them a bit, the content is still the same. 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