From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from atuin.qyliss.net (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by atuin.qyliss.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 07C269A81; Wed, 17 Jun 2026 19:21:27 +0000 (UTC) Received: by atuin.qyliss.net (Postfix, from userid 993) id 587AE9AAF; Wed, 17 Jun 2026 19:21:24 +0000 (UTC) X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on atuin.qyliss.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=0.4 required=3.0 tests=DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID, DKIM_VALID_AU,DMARC_MISSING,FROM_SUSPICIOUS_NTLD,SPF_HELO_NONE, T_PDS_OTHER_BAD_TLD autolearn=no autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 Received: from mail-108-mta177.mxroute.com (mail-108-mta177.mxroute.com [136.175.108.177]) by atuin.qyliss.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id F28449AAC for ; Wed, 17 Jun 2026 19:21:22 +0000 (UTC) Received: from filter006.mxroute.com ([136.175.111.3] filter006.mxroute.com) (Authenticated sender: mN4UYu2MZsgR) by mail-108-mta177.mxroute.com (ZoneMTA) with ESMTPSA id 19ed707eb8100067f7.002 for (version=TLSv1.3 cipher=TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384); Wed, 17 Jun 2026 19:21:21 +0000 X-Zone-Loop: 061acae7398d63802d1ed4e8da44d23ca8c67bc90375 X-Originating-IP: [136.175.111.3] DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gagarin.work; s=x; h=Content-Transfer-Encoding:Content-Type:In-Reply-To: From:References:Cc:To:Subject:MIME-Version:Date:Message-ID:Sender:Reply-To: Content-ID:Content-Description:Resent-Date:Resent-From:Resent-Sender: Resent-To:Resent-Cc:Resent-Message-ID:List-Id:List-Help:List-Unsubscribe: List-Subscribe:List-Post:List-Owner:List-Archive; bh=gC7HfqSAwTPnXq5kNchCW6e5C4Z+a43cFLke0bvXio0=; b=j47MOVF4mx8bq0czVn6CWNb6be vL0Ih6pkUcH9MFM7R8uYk4l5St9SHjgktf8VDV52eCwJKsohVpfOf7PGFsF580m8sHeX22m95kC96 HIGOJqKXKZVSPM7zvNb1sHHo0+M34qmmluGPoIY44sTeiwEbN0oIAOylcfH1mMN54YWZNQownulY/ ImOurdG1xRGF+XhvjIZMnzFyzHYmkOp19tqiZfvCzsUELnB13bUdBjh7IGtopG59XY+TlIN9nklXR Cuqy4uRlnW4I5XyF+m8KGlLbi73EypHPs6KXfPZyu3ExF44O3NUZhekY4dg4qQtbF2vHNeaGvBnKp XxSdrXbA==; Message-ID: <4ad66662-ea6a-4dce-b291-c3c7cadc3ed8@gagarin.work> Date: Wed, 17 Jun 2026 21:21:17 +0200 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla Thunderbird Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page To: Alyssa Ross References: <20260617122059.96917-1-valentin@gagarin.work> <87jyrxgtgb.fsf@alyssa.is> Content-Language: en-US From: Valentin Gagarin In-Reply-To: <87jyrxgtgb.fsf@alyssa.is> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Authenticated-Id: valentin@gagarin.work Message-ID-Hash: PGRBJ7NXJHZ62R7JXJEZUQB2R4JMECM4 X-Message-ID-Hash: PGRBJ7NXJHZ62R7JXJEZUQB2R4JMECM4 X-MailFrom: valentin@gagarin.work X-Mailman-Rule-Misses: dmarc-mitigation; no-senders; approved; loop; banned-address; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-0; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-1; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-2; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-3; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-4; emergency; member-moderation; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header CC: devel@spectrum-os.org X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.10 Precedence: list List-Id: Patches and low-level development discussion Archived-At: List-Archive: List-Help: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Signed-off-by: Valentin Gagarin On 6/17/26 15:57, Alyssa Ross wrote: > Valentin Gagarin writes: > >> This change focuses each sentence exclusively on one central aspect of >> the project's value proposition. The hope behind this is that it will >> catch on a bit better that way. >> --- >> Documentation/index.html | 8 ++++---- >> 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) > > Reviewed-by: Alyssa Ross > > But also needs a Signed-off-by. > >> diff --git a/Documentation/index.html b/Documentation/index.html >> index 6d6faf7..9777c15 100644 >> --- a/Documentation/index.html >> +++ b/Documentation/index.html >> @@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ nav_order: 0 >>

Spectrum — a step towards usable secure computing

>> >>

>> -Spectrum is a project that aims to create a computer operating system, >> -based on the principle of security by compartmentalization, that has a >> -lower barrier to entry and is easier to use and maintain than other >> +Spectrum is a project to create a computer operating system, >> +based on the principle of security by compartmentalization. >> +It aims to have a lower barrier to entry and to be easier to use and maintain than other >> such systems. >> >>

>> @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Spectrum is an upstream-first project. Wherever possible, we aim to >> participate in cross-project collaboration to move the entire free >> desktop ecosystem forward, rather than designing Spectrum-specific >> solutions. This reduces the amount of software that Spectrum as a >> -small project is solely responsible for maintaining, and it derisks >> +small project is solely responsible for maintaining. It also derisks >> the project — even if Spectrum does not achieve all its goals, our >> efforts will have resulted in improvements across the board of free >> desktop systems. >> -- >> 2.54.0