From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from atuin.qyliss.net (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by atuin.qyliss.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 90C04A57D; Fri, 19 Jun 2026 15:05:21 +0000 (UTC) Received: by atuin.qyliss.net (Postfix, from userid 993) id 1E35BA572; Fri, 19 Jun 2026 15:05:19 +0000 (UTC) X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on atuin.qyliss.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.8 required=3.0 tests=DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID, DKIM_VALID_AU,DMARC_MISSING,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW,SPF_HELO_PASS autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 Received: from fout-b7-smtp.messagingengine.com (fout-b7-smtp.messagingengine.com [202.12.124.150]) by atuin.qyliss.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id EC1D5A570 for ; Fri, 19 Jun 2026 15:05:17 +0000 (UTC) Received: from phl-compute-03.internal (phl-compute-03.internal [10.202.2.43]) by mailfout.stl.internal (Postfix) with ESMTP id BF2031D00114; Fri, 19 Jun 2026 11:05:16 -0400 (EDT) Received: from phl-frontend-04 ([10.202.2.163]) by phl-compute-03.internal (MEProxy); Fri, 19 Jun 2026 11:05:16 -0400 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=alyssa.is; h=cc :cc:content-type:content-type:date:date:from:from:in-reply-to :in-reply-to:message-id:mime-version:references:reply-to:subject :subject:to:to; s=fm3; t=1781881516; x=1781967916; bh=OZaedILLMp 7WG5w7EBMoPT0vLJbb6KYFT5JORWvTcmA=; b=xrJbBUG9e0TxCbg1DUe48HQJ59 InkmD/ocWzCGKYcxrPwCLzes25VxxBOsJFkeSW9ZBky8Sih5o4Sp9S33BHY7SiL0 jjwuPxd9Ck7jalVQWwq2oSkvJDcQ50njxJyveDQbas3Gux5VBIrRF4R8IPDRcXdD a05YK+2S5pfhl6pp1PqKJluLV3Si+UHUYTx+W4FuewXaI+JdGZOvR9Zo8NTBbdEp e1beHOw4AIcgYxejfBykUuDuxEX056gvaktpwNtdZp626secJ+jFGYz4t2pDGS5k BbhZsVTT2fxfs6zeopwfv1QJfXI7wS8hEFiNpNBwKFEDWD08GSZiQi/9wYXw== DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d= messagingengine.com; h=cc:cc:content-type:content-type:date:date :feedback-id:feedback-id:from:from:in-reply-to:in-reply-to :message-id:mime-version:references:reply-to:subject:subject:to :to:x-me-proxy:x-me-sender:x-me-sender:x-sasl-enc; s=fm1; t= 1781881516; x=1781967916; bh=OZaedILLMp7WG5w7EBMoPT0vLJbb6KYFT5J ORWvTcmA=; b=VCQ0p6jkgOQUvAo0zrh/ImHRBwbXo5z8/EABtCSbM8AjSc+dLC9 Bvof4N+StpMUbitw4ikrAi4nVE/FVrcspeEL7BbdJ4oNwg+IDm8cKu+QxPkE6buB m7mbx4Pgt7ZBfSyUh5+jW0RC6EOc8s1yENj7oA0JUMRxPEFloCENPwB2nEIHN2n0 TebiEoOXONvheeqgdw6jL7VjgIKumlok7qFi1MxbJ3eHcDHD0zBrfHSkevS2mZ+7 FMUm3hlDUzEP7B2JufJrih2r3MTKKVipWxCQX+bXMXah6fDI03eHD1Ul3U0bpktB RqK7Fhrmn5bHlN2ANAP0iCnH2sWlyQgIsZw== X-ME-Sender: X-ME-Received: X-ME-Proxy-Cause: dmFkZTGyACfF710b5IsEOGGdIN9ZHjEEL9LfFHzdb890QmZxtYAw/weGfZsw6q+mZ5VV3W 43vS72I4KOjnSYJKfcMJDkgSF/1VweZ13zfknbxPAmOG7IHvYKhU+oyTY3voDtWQg3IApK DY+y+PNg5eT9qxDLKBPC8ubRVB1N06j1mDgitlXoC4vK6W8po8khor/OE77e2MwETEYdMK 2jo5tWwvL7Zt7P5BUaHxusq0L0QGpbU+TZeLIwvumrXq8vp3RlR+gB/jUtyou+zbb+c0+8 1eagmmxUm4W2MeZvgC5Ew3Yz18qMPAQU13WAqEy7d4znf29JfR9/XESZHsUQ1eMQqsyYtX w8kK4xLBXFE7yvB8ZZTSr/Bt6f8I4qUi6vf4Q9sLRf8iCHapDbJJ+bnOONY80uPoqSvGID pnOltg9MQYm2pkzdl6aW5NPfufp7uUNOa9HMD2G6u9Cz8sm3e/OLOW3QiEWZTxnyo6KCyZ RA3IrrJ2mlHhPmhbbJ7k53Oy59q5Kb3h2Y3ow/p9IE3iUjJXTRAsJe922cK9wCTKZur2eE KgvZFX27xrr0zK4tQKuJVfbcq/inVCYNSD07wBfwJM9F7V86q+DeO6gMM7GdLThIKPCexV I5sFLm0hYVmIFrE0AYShD0o/dejbblQmUyCiJedDGk5Avg8UT5EJRIsqWSNQ X-ME-Proxy: Feedback-ID: i12284293:Fastmail Received: by mail.messagingengine.com (Postfix) with ESMTPA; Fri, 19 Jun 2026 11:05:16 -0400 (EDT) Received: by mbp.qyliss.net (Postfix, from userid 1000) id AAB24825CB6F; Fri, 19 Jun 2026 17:05:14 +0200 (CEST) From: Alyssa Ross To: Valentin Gagarin Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page In-Reply-To: <20260617122059.96917-1-valentin@gagarin.work> References: <20260617122059.96917-1-valentin@gagarin.work> Date: Fri, 19 Jun 2026 17:05:13 +0200 Message-ID: <875x3ea7va.fsf@alyssa.is> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="=-=-="; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature" Message-ID-Hash: 77AFQYEVKOVWVC6WK6B4A7VZYJTOA4FZ X-Message-ID-Hash: 77AFQYEVKOVWVC6WK6B4A7VZYJTOA4FZ X-MailFrom: hi@alyssa.is X-Mailman-Rule-Misses: dmarc-mitigation; no-senders; approved; loop; banned-address; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-0; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-1; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-2; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-3; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-4; emergency; member-moderation; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header CC: devel@spectrum-os.org X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.10 Precedence: list List-Id: Patches and low-level development discussion Archived-At: List-Archive: List-Help: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: --=-=-= Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Valentin Gagarin writes: > This change focuses each sentence exclusively on one central aspect of > the project's value proposition. The hope behind this is that it will > catch on a bit better that way. > --- > Documentation/index.html | 8 ++++---- > 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/index.html b/Documentation/index.html > index 6d6faf7..9777c15 100644 > --- a/Documentation/index.html > +++ b/Documentation/index.html > @@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ nav_order: 0 >

Spectrum =E2=80=94 a step towards usable secure computing >=20=20 >

> -Spectrum is a project that aims to create a computer operating system, > -based on the principle of security by compartmentalization, that has a > -lower barrier to entry and is easier to use and maintain than other > +Spectrum is a project to create a computer operating system, > +based on the principle of security by compartmentalization. > +It aims to have a lower barrier to entry and to be easier to use and mai= ntain than other Oh, this line gets a bit long for it's surroundings. I'll just rewrap it. (I believe most of these documents will be wrapped at 70 because that's the Emacs default, but it doesn't necessarily have to stay that way.) --=-=-= Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iHUEARYKAB0WIQRV/neXydHjZma5XLJbRZGEIw/wogUCajVaqQAKCRBbRZGEIw/w oueWAQCHt1jJ7QrbQE7RFbBuwV8b2DKUIzMdbBLqW0IO2lLlxAEArF0LRAiAPc90 zJvyEKSEeSAE4n3/7NecfZPB8fEwqAA= =q8M/ -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-=-=--