From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from atuin.qyliss.net (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by atuin.qyliss.net (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0ADD59856; Wed, 17 Jun 2026 13:58:04 +0000 (UTC) Received: by atuin.qyliss.net (Postfix, from userid 993) id 9E377984E; Wed, 17 Jun 2026 13:58:02 +0000 (UTC) X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 4.0.1 (2024-03-26) on atuin.qyliss.net X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.8 required=3.0 tests=DKIM_SIGNED,DKIM_VALID, DKIM_VALID_AU,DMARC_MISSING,RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW,SPF_HELO_PASS autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no version=4.0.1 Received: from fout-a3-smtp.messagingengine.com (fout-a3-smtp.messagingengine.com [103.168.172.146]) by atuin.qyliss.net (Postfix) with ESMTPS id D5425984B for ; Wed, 17 Jun 2026 13:58:01 +0000 (UTC) Received: from phl-compute-06.internal (phl-compute-06.internal [10.202.2.46]) by mailfout.phl.internal (Postfix) with ESMTP id 05D2FEC00C7; Wed, 17 Jun 2026 09:58:01 -0400 (EDT) Received: from phl-frontend-04 ([10.202.2.163]) by phl-compute-06.internal (MEProxy); Wed, 17 Jun 2026 09:58:01 -0400 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=alyssa.is; h=cc :cc:content-type:content-type:date:date:from:from:in-reply-to :in-reply-to:message-id:mime-version:references:reply-to:subject :subject:to:to; s=fm3; t=1781704681; x=1781791081; bh=oQngdZng6c zA+R5I9vfPPPN3o1bqLFMP4BeKGGR0fQM=; b=U/yOo1/LaKWXJ5xEkCLDc6+o3i Cvw+WNPwWaj+d7OOI48cWhXvFo2dwMUJVe8JsjRqpatWqWE3t8B37UPPD/IztBmj XPwLqp1xLFXb7UGjZAdmY7qY/b0GDiXrD2Vka+YKuqjwVNc5NGy7vyDwBoDB75WF PwGFoqjOP9qGnVOFvkWT6iVqP9WmLfyQdExuf/Gg1rKGqiYTjrdZxyCRr97yONLO 9ZbWRLw4PB58OpG2X06uhq/VG2HXzzWrngXMSQhCSJV8qNo3VuPOl1nwQgB/MGBz peYTfqo/sxVZXDAfI0sE20GsuORZ9wLw+r3UH16s7QURX2v4rtVMQ2S9+H0g== DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d= messagingengine.com; h=cc:cc:content-type:content-type:date:date :feedback-id:feedback-id:from:from:in-reply-to:in-reply-to :message-id:mime-version:references:reply-to:subject:subject:to :to:x-me-proxy:x-me-sender:x-me-sender:x-sasl-enc; s=fm1; t= 1781704681; x=1781791081; bh=oQngdZng6czA+R5I9vfPPPN3o1bqLFMP4Be KGGR0fQM=; b=bnjLe9seMRGhIPpalCRg6M2IKodCIEW9Bx1R/UmOu+furVy6abF 8FmlNrwzZbl13fhHNiuzrIuIQYHvsS3owb/FQQWpesUt1Qv+5PwA/PA/Cf9Ic/jL 4Tcg3x10p7r653v8nbL6UowtXEO+8uSAridNnH86UFQobs8fVO6ieVZ6aM0fT9ZG UbD1mN3+Hd2+TKJzT12kxvbq2EZWFrWSB3TP96ZnSYhQziww815hj/wn4dD77D65 qYxOicoQs6mGZrmkaJ79IVIvHssuH4eft/RYv2SI/JAeEWew2RRPEaksjoyFBY42 MMqPyQ4rCmf4YZvp5svt5v2C5Sodf2ZD2kw== X-ME-Sender: X-ME-Received: X-ME-Proxy-Cause: dmFkZTETFmOo3NU2Ij5xmmNYqZRz8WKFoCir75SgPFhHh0PVRvKB85SInxMU5tq8Bp7DK+ Kuf0oQNIC0VQ0gLAGOQl5UH7nWUpTdce8kAa96IP0weuZF4kVPMlACKGNZk1QF5CIJLex8 MIgSVMYLVA5UCWE/vJ5PRW718DSuxPQTZmhII3xEI5cAXpqXIgxe9HAj7O/M/hkZ9Qy6Oy Xiaake4DlrfeLhRQN7iCirNm5232AHqiAR+G9U4Utkj19pwWajXbDVIzB9ml3vAV8gpwch AmmMOf+9q9MM3H/eY+e3taej2lZB7kCBPM35+8DmowWm47rFC3VHxs9oE+QlKbcSx1KIqv x4A+On7c0twBSUSvDnl/jIFITGFFmK7sFFoXixkHFVn4tl9+3hx4DjplJ9h710hqz2LrNP JaoGpjTn9rqwHUidq3U2ro1NsABTY1NVxMhm1aDIX4NmR1gQ4M4DvbBEpUPa7hbWZ9bj4h hic6QR22CpScI4zcf8nDNJQ4CREjCa6su4Yp+UOaqSSnEEZe2Q8gBJDZ0uMP8ZMjTUoCax QgqefAwh+RPdCmYV7jK1K3WOI9w1Me2uNLmThlgpchS9wiypnEHNDjqQkOfMteRkbW4GCA yclIO49YgosMjdeCi67Yk3bm0XCjDWktxFcyIT/IMLQHWGpnkze/85jbSfaA X-ME-Proxy: Feedback-ID: i12284293:Fastmail Received: by mail.messagingengine.com (Postfix) with ESMTPA; Wed, 17 Jun 2026 09:58:00 -0400 (EDT) Received: by fw12.qyliss.net (Postfix, from userid 1000) id 68B1EB6AA3A5; Wed, 17 Jun 2026 15:57:58 +0200 (CEST) From: Alyssa Ross To: Valentin Gagarin Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page In-Reply-To: <20260617122059.96917-1-valentin@gagarin.work> References: <20260617122059.96917-1-valentin@gagarin.work> Date: Wed, 17 Jun 2026 15:57:56 +0200 Message-ID: <87jyrxgtgb.fsf@alyssa.is> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; boundary="=-=-="; micalg=pgp-sha512; protocol="application/pgp-signature" Message-ID-Hash: AZWIXAV4K4PVWXXTT5I33X374N4ZSAIC X-Message-ID-Hash: AZWIXAV4K4PVWXXTT5I33X374N4ZSAIC X-MailFrom: hi@alyssa.is X-Mailman-Rule-Misses: dmarc-mitigation; no-senders; approved; loop; banned-address; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-0; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-1; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-2; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-3; header-match-devel.spectrum-os.org-4; emergency; member-moderation; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header CC: devel@spectrum-os.org X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.10 Precedence: list List-Id: Patches and low-level development discussion Archived-At: List-Archive: List-Help: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: --=-=-= Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Valentin Gagarin writes: > This change focuses each sentence exclusively on one central aspect of > the project's value proposition. The hope behind this is that it will > catch on a bit better that way. > --- > Documentation/index.html | 8 ++++---- > 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) Reviewed-by: Alyssa Ross But also needs a Signed-off-by. > diff --git a/Documentation/index.html b/Documentation/index.html > index 6d6faf7..9777c15 100644 > --- a/Documentation/index.html > +++ b/Documentation/index.html > @@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ nav_order: 0 >

Spectrum =E2=80=94 a step towards usable secure computing >=20=20 >

> -Spectrum is a project that aims to create a computer operating system, > -based on the principle of security by compartmentalization, that has a > -lower barrier to entry and is easier to use and maintain than other > +Spectrum is a project to create a computer operating system, > +based on the principle of security by compartmentalization. > +It aims to have a lower barrier to entry and to be easier to use and mai= ntain than other > such systems. >=20=20 >

> @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Spectrum is an upstream-first project. Wherever possib= le, we aim to > participate in cross-project collaboration to move the entire free > desktop ecosystem forward, rather than designing Spectrum-specific > solutions. This reduces the amount of software that Spectrum as a > -small project is solely responsible for maintaining, and it derisks > +small project is solely responsible for maintaining. It also derisks > the project =E2=80=94 even if Spectrum does not achieve all its goals, o= ur > efforts will have resulted in improvements across the board of free > desktop systems. > --=20 > 2.54.0 --=-=-= Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name="signature.asc" -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- iHUEARYKAB0WIQQGoGac7QfI+H5ZtFCZddwkt31pFQUCajKn5AAKCRCZddwkt31p FQn3APwJJW60/1VCKfAFjwu6YpIGKF7Sgc5d4j6YZYhNaoEswwEA7UgTGm9ZXkfR ows+JcSSOnYspa71+Sx5ahVT1dDLxgg= =p1Hv -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-=-=--