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From: "impaqt" <impaqt@vendek.net>
To: "Alyssa Ross" <hi@alyssa.is>, <devel@spectrum-os.org>
Subject: Re: [PATCH doc v2] Document crosvm memfd server
Date: Wed, 27 May 2020 17:40:43 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <C31Y0KD58S7F.1X8LFPQRPJXVM@jupiter> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20200527232709.22211-1-hi@alyssa.is>

Looks good. One minor nitpick, take it or leave it:

> +Spectrum's crosvm has been augmented with a feature called the "`memfd
> +server`", (currently only on the
> +https://spectrum-os.org/git/crosvm/log/?h=interguest[interguest]
> +branch). This is a small server that listens on a Unix stream socket.

This should be either a comma or parenthesis, not both.

This is just a personal preference of mine, but one I wish were
more widely adopted: when writing markdown I only wrap the "proper
nouns" in `code blocks` for consistency, e.g. "`memfd` server" not
"`memfd server`". But this isn't a hill I'm prepared to die on.

Reviewed-by: impaqt <impaqt@vendek.net>
^^^ Is this what you meant by a tag?

  reply	other threads:[~2020-05-28  0:57 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 7+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2020-05-26 17:37 [PATCH doc] Document crosvm memfd server Alyssa Ross
2020-05-27  0:13 ` impaqt
2020-05-27 23:27 ` [PATCH doc v2] " Alyssa Ross
2020-05-28  0:40   ` impaqt [this message]
2020-05-29 18:12     ` Alyssa Ross
2020-05-29 18:49   ` Cole Helbling
2020-05-29 18:59   ` Alyssa Ross

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