From: Valentin Gagarin <valentin@gagarin.work>
To: devel@spectrum-os.org
Cc: Valentin Gagarin <valentin@gagarin.work>
Subject: [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page
Date: Wed, 17 Jun 2026 14:20:47 +0200 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20260617122059.96917-1-valentin@gagarin.work> (raw)
This change focuses each sentence exclusively on one central aspect of
the project's value proposition. The hope behind this is that it will
catch on a bit better that way.
---
Documentation/index.html | 8 ++++----
1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/index.html b/Documentation/index.html
index 6d6faf7..9777c15 100644
--- a/Documentation/index.html
+++ b/Documentation/index.html
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ nav_order: 0
<h1>Spectrum — a step towards <em>usable</em> secure computing</h1>
<p>
-Spectrum is a project that aims to create a computer operating system,
-based on the principle of security by compartmentalization, that has a
-lower barrier to entry and is easier to use and maintain than other
+Spectrum is a project to create a computer operating system,
+based on the principle of security by compartmentalization.
+It aims to have a lower barrier to entry and to be easier to use and maintain than other
such systems.
<p>
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Spectrum is an upstream-first project. Wherever possible, we aim to
participate in cross-project collaboration to move the entire free
desktop ecosystem forward, rather than designing Spectrum-specific
solutions. This reduces the amount of software that Spectrum as a
-small project is solely responsible for maintaining, and it derisks
+small project is solely responsible for maintaining. It also derisks
the project — even if Spectrum does not achieve all its goals, our
efforts will have resulted in improvements across the board of free
desktop systems.
--
2.54.0
next reply other threads:[~2026-06-17 12:21 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2026-06-17 12:20 Valentin Gagarin [this message]
2026-06-17 13:57 ` [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page Alyssa Ross
2026-06-17 19:21 ` Valentin Gagarin
2026-06-19 15:05 ` Alyssa Ross
2026-06-19 15:05 ` Alyssa Ross
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