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From: Valentin Gagarin <valentin@gagarin.work>
To: devel@spectrum-os.org
Cc: Valentin Gagarin <valentin@gagarin.work>
Subject: [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page
Date: Wed, 17 Jun 2026 14:20:47 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20260617122059.96917-1-valentin@gagarin.work> (raw)

This change focuses each sentence exclusively on one central aspect of
the project's value proposition.  The hope behind this is that it will
catch on a bit better that way.
---
 Documentation/index.html | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/index.html b/Documentation/index.html
index 6d6faf7..9777c15 100644
--- a/Documentation/index.html
+++ b/Documentation/index.html
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ nav_order: 0
 <h1>Spectrum — a step towards <em>usable</em> secure computing</h1>
 
 <p>
-Spectrum is a project that aims to create a computer operating system,
-based on the principle of security by compartmentalization, that has a
-lower barrier to entry and is easier to use and maintain than other
+Spectrum is a project to create a computer operating system,
+based on the principle of security by compartmentalization.
+It aims to have a lower barrier to entry and to be easier to use and maintain than other
 such systems.
 
 <p>
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Spectrum is an upstream-first project.  Wherever possible, we aim to
 participate in cross-project collaboration to move the entire free
 desktop ecosystem forward, rather than designing Spectrum-specific
 solutions.  This reduces the amount of software that Spectrum as a
-small project is solely responsible for maintaining, and it derisks
+small project is solely responsible for maintaining.  It also derisks
 the project — even if Spectrum does not achieve all its goals, our
 efforts will have resulted in improvements across the board of free
 desktop systems.
-- 
2.54.0


             reply	other threads:[~2026-06-17 12:21 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2026-06-17 12:20 Valentin Gagarin [this message]
2026-06-17 13:57 ` [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page Alyssa Ross
2026-06-17 19:21   ` Valentin Gagarin
2026-06-19 15:05 ` Alyssa Ross
2026-06-19 15:05 ` Alyssa Ross

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