Re: [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page

[Alyssa Ross <hi@alyssa.is>]

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Valentin Gagarin <valentin@gagarin.work> writes:

> This change focuses each sentence exclusively on one central aspect of
> the project's value proposition.  The hope behind this is that it will
> catch on a bit better that way.
> ---
>  Documentation/index.html | 8 ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

Reviewed-by: Alyssa Ross <hi@alyssa.is>

But also needs a Signed-off-by.

> diff --git a/Documentation/index.html b/Documentation/index.html
> index 6d6faf7..9777c15 100644
> --- a/Documentation/index.html
> +++ b/Documentation/index.html
> @@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ nav_order: 0
>  <h1>Spectrum — a step towards <em>usable</em> secure computing</h1>
>  
>  <p>
> -Spectrum is a project that aims to create a computer operating system,
> -based on the principle of security by compartmentalization, that has a
> -lower barrier to entry and is easier to use and maintain than other
> +Spectrum is a project to create a computer operating system,
> +based on the principle of security by compartmentalization.
> +It aims to have a lower barrier to entry and to be easier to use and maintain than other
>  such systems.
>  
>  <p>
> @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Spectrum is an upstream-first project.  Wherever possible, we aim to
>  participate in cross-project collaboration to move the entire free
>  desktop ecosystem forward, rather than designing Spectrum-specific
>  solutions.  This reduces the amount of software that Spectrum as a
> -small project is solely responsible for maintaining, and it derisks
> +small project is solely responsible for maintaining.  It also derisks
>  the project — even if Spectrum does not achieve all its goals, our
>  efforts will have resulted in improvements across the board of free
>  desktop systems.
> -- 
> 2.54.0

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