Re: [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page

[Alyssa Ross <hi@alyssa.is>]

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Valentin Gagarin <valentin@gagarin.work> writes:

> This change focuses each sentence exclusively on one central aspect of
> the project's value proposition.  The hope behind this is that it will
> catch on a bit better that way.
> ---
>  Documentation/index.html | 8 ++++----
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/index.html b/Documentation/index.html
> index 6d6faf7..9777c15 100644
> --- a/Documentation/index.html
> +++ b/Documentation/index.html
> @@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ nav_order: 0
>  <h1>Spectrum — a step towards <em>usable</em> secure computing</h1>
>  
>  <p>
> -Spectrum is a project that aims to create a computer operating system,
> -based on the principle of security by compartmentalization, that has a
> -lower barrier to entry and is easier to use and maintain than other
> +Spectrum is a project to create a computer operating system,
> +based on the principle of security by compartmentalization.
> +It aims to have a lower barrier to entry and to be easier to use and maintain than other

Oh, this line gets a bit long for it's surroundings.  I'll just rewrap it.

(I believe most of these documents will be wrapped at 70 because that's
the Emacs default, but it doesn't necessarily have to stay that way.)

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