Re: [PATCH] Documentation: shorter sentences on the front page

[Valentin Gagarin <valentin@gagarin.work>]

Signed-off-by: Valentin Gagarin <valentin@gagarin.work>

On 6/17/26 15:57, Alyssa Ross wrote:
> Valentin Gagarin <valentin@gagarin.work> writes:
> 
>> This change focuses each sentence exclusively on one central aspect of
>> the project's value proposition.  The hope behind this is that it will
>> catch on a bit better that way.
>> ---
>>   Documentation/index.html | 8 ++++----
>>   1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 
> Reviewed-by: Alyssa Ross <hi@alyssa.is>
> 
> But also needs a Signed-off-by.
> 
>> diff --git a/Documentation/index.html b/Documentation/index.html
>> index 6d6faf7..9777c15 100644
>> --- a/Documentation/index.html
>> +++ b/Documentation/index.html
>> @@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ nav_order: 0
>>   <h1>Spectrum — a step towards <em>usable</em> secure computing</h1>
>>   
>>   <p>
>> -Spectrum is a project that aims to create a computer operating system,
>> -based on the principle of security by compartmentalization, that has a
>> -lower barrier to entry and is easier to use and maintain than other
>> +Spectrum is a project to create a computer operating system,
>> +based on the principle of security by compartmentalization.
>> +It aims to have a lower barrier to entry and to be easier to use and maintain than other
>>   such systems.
>>   
>>   <p>
>> @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Spectrum is an upstream-first project.  Wherever possible, we aim to
>>   participate in cross-project collaboration to move the entire free
>>   desktop ecosystem forward, rather than designing Spectrum-specific
>>   solutions.  This reduces the amount of software that Spectrum as a
>> -small project is solely responsible for maintaining, and it derisks
>> +small project is solely responsible for maintaining.  It also derisks
>>   the project — even if Spectrum does not achieve all its goals, our
>>   efforts will have resulted in improvements across the board of free
>>   desktop systems.
>> -- 
>> 2.54.0